There are times when having a background in novel writing is not a boon. Fitting all that dialogue was a PAIN. I'd say I'd do better in the future, but the Falconress has an unfortunate tendency towards polysyllabism D:
Not sure I'm entirely happy with the speech bubble layout still, but I'm sick and don't have the energy to mess with it, so it'll have to do.
Ack, Falc's dialogue.
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